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阅卷考官经常是不会看那些图表的,因此文章必须逻辑清晰,如果描述得能令人在脑海里画出那个 data chart,这篇Task1无疑会达到8分的水平。
开篇的首句话可以是一句高度概括性的 introduction(当然开门见山地直接描述也是一种写法)这样做不仅使文章更于完美,而且可以达到凑字数的目的(但不要照抄题目,因为这样不会给分!)
接下来另起一段开始进行描迷(根据实际情况写1-2段),这当中经常要连续使用非限定性定语从句,从而使得描述过程流畅、清晰。
也可再另起一段进行简短的综(并非必须)上述的任何一个步都要循依据现有data进行客观描述的原则,任何推测性或议论性的内容写得再多、再精彩不但不会加分,而且还会成为扣分的因素。
A类 图表类——曲线图类
曲线图是雅思小作文中比较容易写的一类图形。和其他类别的图表题目一样写作的时候一般分为三个部分来下笔课篇。要注意的是时态。
曲线图写作结构为
1.引题( Introduction)
一般采用一到两句话综合介绍曲线图所表示的内容。首句话一般给出图表的内容是关于什么的。
如: The curve illustrates the number of cases of X-type crimes committed in China between the years1999 and 2009. 注意时态。
尽管原图描述的是过去的内容或信息,但首句所说的是本图描述的信息,所以使用现在时态
第二句给出总体的曲线走势。如: canbe seen that X-type crimes decreased dramatically to 100 case around 2005 and then increased to1,000 before the year 2009. 再次注意时态。
这里的内容是具体发生在过去的,所以用一般过去时。
2.正文( Describing the graph in details)
这是图表的正文部分。考生要定好逻辑顺序和所要描述的内容。
3.结尾( Concluding sentences)
可以用一到两句话结尾,但不要加自己的评论,因为加入自己的主观意见或看法和原图没有任何联系,所以会被考官视为和主题无关( irrelevant),切记!
范文
下面一片曲线图的范文示例,请大家学习。
环球雅思小作文解析
The graph compares the population of smoking in males and females in Australia between 1960 and 2005. It is clear that the population of smoking for both men and women made a steady decrease from 1985
In 1960, about 700, 000 men were smoking, and this number dropped gradually to 500.000 by 1975 and continued to decrease until 2005. On the contrary, the population of smoking in women in 1960 was fairly low and was about 50.000. By 1970 this figure increased to 100.000 and 200.000 in 1980 respectively. But after 1985 the number of smoking in female began to decline and continued on this downward turn until 2005. It can be seen that the peak of the population of smoking was 700000(males). Conversely, the valley of smoking was 50000(females)
In conclusion, the population of smoking in men and women fell significantly throughout the period. But the smoking population of women remained lower than that of men during the entire period
范文分析
①几个色字都是同义词替换,注意首段的" decrease”是名词,而第二段的case是动词。
②曲线图中如果有两条线(如本图),那么必须将这两条线进行对比(如范文后一段第2句话),否则会被扣分。
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