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01 Part2话题
Describe a person who offered help on your study or work
You should say:
Who he or she is
When and where he or she helped you
How he or she helped you
And explain how you felt about his or her help
02 话题分析
这是一道人物类话题,讲述一位帮助过你的人,题目比较贴近我们的生活,难度适中。大家可以从校园环境、家庭生活中教会我们知识或者为我们提供帮助的人来展开思路,根据小问分解回答要点。
题目分解:
先问“Who he or she is” 他/她是谁?
一般情况下可以从熟悉的老师、家人、朋友说起,如果有比较特殊的经历,也可以是在某一个场合陌生人主动提供的帮助,只要是结合自己的亲身经历加以描述即可。
第二问“When and where he or she helped you” 什么时间什么地点他/她帮助了你?
时间,地点都是比较常规的回答。时间的描述可以是比较模糊的年份,也可以具体到某一天的某一个时刻;地点的描述可以从国家、城市、区域、详细地址,也可以从地点的属性来描述,比如学校、家里、公司、街边等等。
第三问“How he or she helped you”如何帮助你的?
这一小问应该对整个他人帮助你的过程进行一个细节的描述,为了让自己的素材更加丰富,可以说在接受帮助前是什么状况,他人以什么样的形式提供的帮助,是口头的教导/鼓励,实际付出的行动,还是提供了其他的资源和渠道等等,之后还可以讲一讲自己在接受帮助后的结果如何。
第四问“And explain how you felt about his or her help” 你的感受?
一般情况下接受他人的帮助我们先想到的就是感激、感动之情,然后还可以进一步延伸到自己的想法,接收了他人的帮助,将来有一天遇到同样的情况也会愿意帮助别人等等。
下面是关于这个话题可以延伸出来的思维图
About one month ago, I was told by my teacher that I didn’t reach the final competition. I was extremely upset and grieved since I thought I had made full preparation for that competition. I packed all my stuff and decided to use the restroom before I leave.
When I got into the restroom, I found the floor was somehow wet, and since the floor was made of marble, it was even harder for me to keep balance, so I decided to leave for my own safety, however all of a sudden, I slipped and almost fell, I closed my eyes and hoped not to get hurt. Surprisingly, I was held by a young girl with long curly hair, she said she has been witnessing and paying attention to me since the moment I got into this restroom, I acted so nervously and frightened that she hesitated whether to support me or not, after all we were strangers.
Frankly speaking, I didn’t expect anyone to help me at the moment since everyone around me were all strangers, however, what this girl did made me feel really warm, especially under the situation that I was fragile and needed comfort. Although she didn’t do anything that helped me a lot, her warm actions and kind heart moved me a lot. I thought there were very few warm-hearted people in that city, but I was wrong. I decided to be a person like her and always dedicate myself to give help, in case that there are also other people like me who needed just a little support.
地道词汇:
make full preparation for 为...做足准备
all of a sudden 突然地
fragile 脆弱的,易碎的
dedicate 奉献
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