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雅思大作文还不会论证?这3种方法助你打开思路!

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雅思大作文的写作,光靠单词、句型的积累是不够的。在这个部分的写作中,想拿高分,我们除了要展现过硬的英语水平,还要展现成熟的思考方式,这就不得不提到“论证”这一点。那么,常见的大作文论证方式有哪些呢?

因果关系论证

这种论证方法,顾名思义,是通过阐述支持或反对一种说法的原因来论证观点,考验同学们的逻辑性,这一点也是雅思考官很看重的一点。所以同学们运用方法时,一定要保证逻辑清晰,用好的话,这一点是能够大大帮助我们的写作加分的!下面,给同学们用具体实例讲解一下,并给同学们附上常用的句型。

 

【具体例子】

题目:It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

范例段落(出自剑10官方范文):

To some extent the question depends on the age of the child. (给出观点)To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish, as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished. (原因1)Once the age of reason is reached however, a child can be rewarded for good behaviour and discouraged from bad. (原因2)This kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments, which might entail many negative consequences unintended by the parents.(导致的结果)

这一段中,注意第二句to punish开始的那一段,就是非常典型的因果论证法。在开头,段落表明了惩戒的使用取决于孩子的年龄,然后开始论证,先说了惩罚很小的孩子这个行为是错误的也是比较愚蠢的,接着阐述了原因,原因是小婴儿根本不懂发生了什么,也不知道他们为什么会被惩罚,等到他们长大了,懂得明辨是非了,这样的做法才会更合理。这样的论证符合自然逻辑,因此也成为了一次非常合理完美的论证,简单明了,富有说服力,同学们有没有get到这种方法呢?【添加微信号:TODO1818,领取更多雅思备考干货】

【常用句型】

● To begin with...

● First(ly)...Second(ly)...Third(ly)...Last(ly)...

● First of all...

● The first and the most important reason is that...

● On the one hand...On the other hand...

● Another equally important aspect is...

● Besides, other reasons are...

● For one thing...For another...

● Last but not least,...

● because / since / as / due to / owing to

● because of / thanks to / as a result of

● therefore / hence / thus / as a result / consequently

● the reason why...is that...

● the main factor toward this is that...

● It is related to / associated with the phenomenon that...

 

举例论证

举例论证,相信同学们不陌生,这种方式也很好理解:即通过具体的例子来论证你的观点。这种论证方法最好上手,也很有说服力。不过,这对于同学们的素材积累有一定要求——为了让论证更有说服力、不随意,我们基本不能像口语考试那样,用自己个人的例子来论证,而是要选择一些名人、热点新闻等这样的例子来论证。因此,用到这个方法时,同学们要注意素材的取舍哦!

 

【具体例子】

在这里呢,Vicky想给同学们说两种比较“安全”且说服力满满的举例法。第一种举例法,我们可以用名人事例。比如,谈及教育的重要性或好的老师的重要性之类的话题时,我们可以用国内新闻里看到过的人物(比如张桂梅老师)作为论据,这样的素材放在作文里是很有说服力的,会非常有力地让你的论点得到证明。比如,我们想说好的老师的重要性时,我们可以这样举例:

A good teacher can affect students deeply. For example, a Chinese teacher named Zhang Guimei devoted her life into helping girls from poor families with getting free education, providing them with the opportunities to enter universities, which will change their life forever.

句首表达立场,然后举例论证,这样,就很有力地完成了一次论证啦!

其次,我们还可以用一些我们大家熟知的热点话题来作为例子。社交媒体一直是雅思写作中的热门话题,那比如我们谈到关于社交媒体的利弊时,我们可以用我们所熟知的社交平台来举例,比如:

Social media can be harmful in some ways. Take Weibo as an example, which has the similar function with Twitter. People are spending more time browsing news and information through Weibo, but with the increasing number of fake news and misleading information, people can be easily misguided. This is a worrying phenomenon caused by social media today.

像这样用我们大家都知道的话题来举例,也是我们选取例子最合适的方式之一。同学们只要记住,在举例之前,最好先申明自己的立场,这样才能让考官马上就明白你想说什么哦。

 

【常用句型】

● For example/instance

● ...such as A, B, C and so on...

● A good case in point is that...

● To consider the case / one's experience as an example

● Take... as an example

 

假设论证

这种论证方法呢,也是比较常见的,即通过假定某种情况的发生,来支持或反对我们所持有的论点,这样的方法也很考察我们的逻辑性,需要我们保持头脑清晰,而不是毫无逻辑地乱作出假设。Vicky来给同学们看看实例。

【具体例子】

题目:Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

范例段落(出自剑18官方范文):

It is perfectly reasonable for students to enter university with a strong sense of curiosity and desire to learn as much as possible. Unfortunately, we tend to put subjects into artificial boxes, suggesting that business, art and science are not connected. If students become too focused on a single area, it may stifle their initial curiosity, limiting their potential. (假设1)They could also graduate with a very narrow skill set that doesn’t translate well to the current job market, which often favors those who have taken a multidisciplinary approach to their studies.(假设2)

在此处,范文用了假设学生太过关注于某一科目可能会带来的负面影响,通过假设这种情况,推理出这种情况带来的影响,这也是体现我们雅思写作逻辑性的一方面。同学们要记住,我们做假设的时候,一定也是要有逻辑的,不能做出的假设完全不合理,这样的话我们的写作也是无法自圆其说的哦。要给出合理的假设与分析才能进一步夯实我们的论证。

【常用句型】

● If + xxx will/would

● People would rather...than...

● Suppose / Supposing...

● I presume / assume / suppose...

● xxx postulate...

看完了这篇文章,同学们是不是会觉得突然思路打开了、写雅思大作文没有那么难了呢?这样就对啦!因为雅思大作文真的没有你想象的那么难写,把这些方法灵活运用起来,相信同学们和雅思分手也会是轻轻松松的事情啦!


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