保定雅思培训：雅思写作考官范文-社会中老年人的养老问题

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Nowadays, some older people choose to live in the retirement communities with other people, rather than living with their adult children. Is it a positive or negative development?

题目分析

●本次考试为社会类话题，讨论的是社会中老年人的养老问题。

●本次题目背景句：如今很多老年人选择和其他老年人一起居住在养老院，而不是和他们的子女住在一起，属于分析优点缺点类型的题目。

●本次范文开头段改写题目后引出个人观点。

●主体段分为两个段落，第一段阐述老人住在养老院对老人的好处；第二段老人住在养老院对家庭的好处。

●结尾段总结观点并再次强调个人倾向：住在养老院对老人比较好，但需要有家人探望。

范文示例

Introduction

Backgroundinformation	In the present society, we have stepped into an aging society (老龄化社会). Many countries and governments are much more concerned about (关心) the situation confronting us, especially how can seniors be able to lead a happy life (安享晚年).
Rephrase the topic	Under this circumstance, many geracomiums (n. 敬老院) spring up like mushrooms (如雨后春笋般冒了出来) with the view to furnishing the elderly a better place to settle down (安身).
Attitude orpersonal opinion	Personally, I think this is a wise practice (一个明智的做法) to resolve the aging issue.

译文

背景	在当今社会，我们已经步入老龄化社会。许多国家和政府更关心我们面临的情况，特别是老年人如何能够安享晚年。
改写题目	在这种情况下，为了给老年人提供一个更好的安身之所，许多敬老院如雨后春笋般冒了出来。
立场或个人观点	就我个人而言，我认为这是一个明智的做法，来解决老龄化问题。

Body paragraph 1

Idea	The first reason for approving of retirement homes (养老院) is about the time shortage of young people.
Reason (Why)	In a fast-paced society (快节奏的社会) with fierce competition (竞争激烈), young people always devote themselves wholly to (投入) their work and life, so that spending time and energy taking care of old family members is no more than a fantasy (只是一种幻想).
Example	Therefore, the last hope goes to old people’s homes that can offer bounteous food (丰盛的食物), 24-hour nursing service (护理服务) and entertainment facilities, rendering (v. 致使) them a happy life there.
Conclusion	In a place consisting of old people, they can also make some new companions and friends and establish good relations (建立良好的关系) with them, which improves their emotional well-being (情绪健康).

译文

观点	赞成修建养老院的第一个原因是年轻人没有时间。
解释观点 (理由)	在快节奏、竞争激烈的社会中，年轻人总是全身心地投入到工作和生活中，所以花时间和精力照顾家里的老人只是一种幻想。
例子	因此，最后的希望寄托在养老院上，那里有丰盛的食物，24小时的护理服务和娱乐设施，让他们在那里过上幸福的生活。
结论	在一个都是老人的地方，他们也可以结交一些新的伙伴和朋友，并与他们建立良好的关系，这使他们的情绪更加健康。

Body paragraph 2

Idea	Placing elders into geracomiums can also avoid family conflicts (家庭冲突) caused by the gap between generations (代沟).
Reason (Why)	It is clear that the lifestyles of young and old people are seriously different, even exclusive (adj. 排斥) from each other.
Example	For example, young adults like something exciting and surprising, while the older prefer peacefulness and quietness.
Conclusion	If they live together, it is expected that there would be too many disagreements (n. 分歧), disputes, misunderstandings and even complaints between them, thus putting the family tie (家庭关系) into tension.

译文

观点	把老人安置在敬老院也可以避免代沟引起的家庭冲突。
解释观点 (理由)	很明显，年轻人和老年人的生活方式有很大差异，甚至相互排斥。
例子	例如，年轻人喜欢令人兴奋的事情，而老年人更喜欢平静安逸的生活。
结论	如果他们生活在一起，他们之间会有太多的分歧、争执、误解甚至抱怨，从而使家庭关系变得很紧张。

Conclusion

Main ideaandpersonalattitude	In summary, I believe that the emergence of retirement homes is a blessing for the aged for a more appropriate environment (一个更合适的环境) can be supplied.
Emphasisethe topic	However, they are not a paradise (n. 天堂) without the care and visit of family members.

译文

主要观点及个人观点	综上所述，我认为养老院的出现是对老年人的一种祝福，可以提供一个更合适的环境。
强调主题	然而，没有家人的关心和探访，这些地方就不是天堂。

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词汇累积

an aging society	老龄化社会
concerned about	关心
lead a happy life	安享晚年
geracomiums	n. 敬老院
spring up like mushrooms	如雨后春笋般冒了出来
settle down	安身
a wise practice	一个明智的做法
retirement homes	养老院
a fast-paced society	快节奏的社会
fierce competition	竞争激烈
devote to	投入
no more than a fantasy	只是一种幻想
bounteous food	丰盛的食物
nursing service	护理服务
rendering	v. 致使
establish good relations	建立良好的关系
emotional well-being	情绪健康
family conflicts	家庭冲突
the gap betweengenerations	代沟
exclusive	adj. 排斥
disagreements	n. 分歧
family tie	家庭关系
a more appropriateenvironment	一个更合适的环境
paradise	n. 天堂

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